Hmapusb04

Your application has been

For the following reasons:

Ø  Your metagaming definition is correct, but I’d like for you to add an example, to show me you fully understand the meaning of the term.

Ø  Your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please read this page carefully, and use this information to write a new definition.

From looking at your application, it seems to me that you did not read the guide on top of this page. Please read everything found on top of this page (this part specifically). Me assuming you have not is due to the following:

Ø  Your biography is not really a biography, but rather three short sentences which don’t really relate to eachother, and don’t provide me with a backstory of your character as a person. I want you to rewrite this completely, providing me with a decently-sized paragraph, which contains atleast two references to the server lore. The wiki contains most of the server lore, but since you applied as a Dwarf you’ll specifically want to go the Dwarven lore.

Ø  Redishpandish is not a roleplay name, please make sure you change this to a name fitting for a medieval fantasy setting.

Ø  Your interesting facts are too vague, and I want you to change this. Please go more in depth, and make each fact atleast a sentence long. Provide me with details, and explain these traits your character has further. Be sure they apply to your character, and are more unique. In addition to that, I also want to see atleast one weakness listed amongst them.

Ø  Your skin is not only inappropriate for the server’s setting, but it does not represent your character or his face. On the Dwarven wiki page, you can also find all the information you need in regards to the appearance of Dwarves, so please use this to pick a new skin.

You may reapply immediately, but please take some time to fix all of the requested changes.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), my forum account, or on the server (marb121).

You are also encouraged to join our New Player discord, a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community.