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By whitewolf0121

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: whitewolf0121#1185
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information that your character doesn't know, such as using events that the irl player knows but the character shouldn't like saying "WWI happens on July 28 1914"
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character too overpowered to complete many tasks, like having the character destroy the sun.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: Mikono Aludan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: 150 lbs, darkish clothing, deep red eyes, white hair, slim, 6'1"
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Hey there, your application is on its way to being acceptable, but it needs some changes before I can accept it. You have 24 hours to make these changes.

If you have questions, comments, concerns, etc, feel free to get in touch here on the forums, on Discord @ teawithbee#0017, or in-game @ teawithbee.

 

1. Humans can't have red eyes.

2. I honestly am not sure what you mean by "ego transformations," but it doesn't sound like it fits within our lore, so please adjust this. Make sure you also include why your character dislikes something about themselves.

3. You need to fill out the roleplay scenario; make sure it's four sentences long with at least one bit of dialogue and one action.

4. Your explanation for your character's fear needs to be at least 2 sentences long.

5. Please go into more detail regarding the character's metaphorical inner demons. What exactly are these negative traits?

6. Your skin looks fine, though the eye color needs changed, and the hair cannot use noise shading. Please edit your current skin or find a new one.

 

Helpful Links

Skin Archive: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

LotC Discord Server: https://discord.gg/cdbbeJ4

New Player Hub Forum Post: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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