ItzJust4Funz

If this one doesnt make it ill gladly make a new one i had fun when i made it xD. Why i said it so early is because i re read it like twice and posted it and read it once again and thought i messed up with character description facts etc

Hello there,

I am afraid that there are some edits that you need to make on your application. Due to your application being made and submitted before you made a forum account, I have to automatically deny your application. However, I have listed down the edits that you need to make on your application below so that you can make the required changes for your next application.

Edits required:

• Definitions: You need to explain powergaming and metagaming. I suggest  using an example of powergaming and metagaming  with the explaination also through the use of a roleplay scenario so that I know you understand these definitions clearly, along with an explanation of how it doesn't benefit RP.
• Character Name: Your username is not a vaild name for your character, please choose a more suitable name for your character which fits their race. There are many online name generators that you can use to get a unique name. I highly, highly doubt Jade would call your character an extremely weird name that includes a number in it.
• Biography:
  • I highly recommend you do not use the 'village was attacked by orcs' scenario, as many applications in the past have used this scenario and it has become extremely cliche on the server, therefore think of a different scenario for your character.
  • Your character cannot have or be influenced by any form of magic - meaning you cannot have your character starting off with using magic, radiating a magical aura, or being majorly influenced by magic. Furthermore, there is no form of runes that can change your character's race, meaning your character must stick to the race that they were born as.
  • There are many plotholes with your character's biography - there is no explaination as to what happened to his family, how he lost his memories, where he was born, how he aquired his combat skills, and so forth.  Furthermore, why is his birthday marked on his body? That to me just seems to be written in just so the character knows his birthday. Please fix the biography so that it makes sense and goes in depth regarding how your character grew up, what they learnt in terms of skills, and what happened to them which made them the person they are now.
  • You must include one or more piece of LotC lore within your biography. This can include names of cities, cultures, etc.
• Facts
  • Your character cannot radiate a demonic aura - it is not allowed.
  • Please avoid making your character an assassin - there is no indication in his biography which explains why he's an assassin, how he is trained to be an assassin, and so forth. It has become very cliche for new players to apply for an assassin based character, therefore please avoid in making your character such.
  • Once again - your character cannot be a human who is turned into a halfling.

You can reapply within three hours.