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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: powerlock34#7256
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information in roleplay that we got not through our character or in the game. Just by our stupid self in real life.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It's having an expert knowledge of the rules and knowing how to apply the rules to finally get maximum benefits and less penalties.
    Status: Denied

Sir? How could such and elegant person like you interest himself in a humble paysant like me... 

I'm Gaëtan Lock. 

My goal is to make my own family and a new farm. I could feed and entiere village, I tell you ! 

If I can, I'd love to grow in society. Get rich or even have my own kingdom. But dreams are dreams. And reality keeps me to my duty. Growing vegetables and feeding people. 

Character Name: Gaëtan Lock
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Red hairs, blue coat, brown eyes, brown pant (I tried, I'm colorblind) strong, 1.74 metters, 67 kilos.
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Changed Status to Pending

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.
  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Humans can not have red hair.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Melpomenne. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at minty#8400

 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason that too many errors were made.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.
  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Humans can not have red hair.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Pan#9864, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

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