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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: thesnake#3006
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: telling people stuff their charter would not know if you had not told them
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing stuff you charter should not be able to do or forcing an action onto someone else
    Status: Denied

Adventure brought me to this city. what is this city like? Is there any work I can do? Do you have any tips or advice on how to be successful in this city?

 

Character Name: Stone
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: blue eyes, beard, white hair, gray jacket,
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to a multitude of issues within the application, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a noticeable fault in their personality. Simply being shy is not a significantly negative trait, while something like being overly shy to the point of effecting their day-to-day life/future might be.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. One major flaw is that it has too heavy a reliance on noise shading. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

 

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