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Kausu
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is using outside knowledge that your character wouldnt normally have.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is forcing unrealistic/godly powers on someone/something else.
    Status: Denied

I respond to the gentleman saying "Work and nothing else." and walking off bumping into him stealing his wallet. I then walk into the market to find a tavern and look for leads on work as I am running low on money. Walk into the tavern and sit down using the money I just stole for some food and asking for leads. I hear about some bandits and marauders ransacking nearby villages and I pass on them then hearing about a hit on the gentleman I walked into when coming in the city.


Character Name: Kausu
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Fit/agile, Mostly Black Attire with a facemask covering bottom half of face, 183cm, and 189LBS. White hair with red eyes, and more longer messy hair.
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to powergaming, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing two lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography states that your character was kidnapped to join a cult that worshiped Nyx-- Nyx is a Greek Goddess, and does not exist in LOTC.
  • Your Character Biography mentions high school. 'High School' is not a thing that offically exists in LOTC. Most schooling for children in this world is done through either homeschooling or through small town schoolhouses that teach a wide age range of children. After that, Universities are the only types of official schools, some nations choosing to support them.
  • Your Character Biography switches from third person to first person on some occasions. Please keep your typing in third person when talking about your character as a person, not yourself as a person.
  • Your Character Biography states that you killed an entire cult. This is not feasible, and is considered powergaming. One person could not face off against an entire cult-- especially not one that focuses so heavily on fighting as you seem to state.
  • Your Character Biography states that your character is emotionless. While there are creatures and constructs on the server that are capable of this, humans are not one of them. It is possible for someone to repress their emotions, but not for them to be completely absent.
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has red eyes and white hair-- it is not possible for a human to have red eyes, nor is white a natural hair color of humans. For more information on humans, check out this wiki page!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written in third person, just like your bio.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response talks a lot about the actions of others, while it must only focus on yourself. You are allowed to add in some reactions to your actions, but not new information to the point it makes up half the response.
  • our Roleplay Scenario Response also states that your character pickpocketed the man as you went by, yet you did not describe any part of it. Please add detail when making actions such as that so it doesn't seem so sudden.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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