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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Criiimzon#6712
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Ruins the experience
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Unfair, and still ruins the experience
    Status: Denied

Shove him knowing that he is none other then one of those cash grabbers.


Character Name: Zalkar
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 80
Physical Description: Muscular, Sneaky
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Your application has unfortunately been denied. though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is too short. Please write at least 10 Full sentences. 
  • Your Character Biography Lacks references to LOTC lore, This can include, City names, religions, etc. Please check the Wiki for a list of lotc lore.

 

  • Your Physical description needs more information. ‘Sneaky’ is not a physical trait.
  • Your Personality traits require at least 1 flaw. 
  • Your Role play Scenario must contain both an emote and speech.
  • Your Skin is not appropriate for a Snow elf. Please check the Skin archive for examples

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @October#0121, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpN

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