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Kylelew

By Kylelew

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: Kyle #3565
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using means from out of roleplay to win / do asituation in rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: over using your power or just being and annoyence
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box aHe's angry, loyal and stingy. But this is all just a facade, a mechanism to deal with his tormented past.

He was born and grew up in an ordinary family in a developing community, he lived in peace until he was about 16 years old, but at that point things took a turn for the worst.

He lost his brothers in a natural disaster and was caught up with the wrong people. Alongside a brother he had to survive in a relentless world. But with his talents and determination, he managed to crush all that's in the way and start a new life. This has turned him into the man he is today.

While haunted by memories of the past, he now works tracking the people of the past. By doing so, he hopes to find vengeance for the actions in the past and finally find stability and security he has never had.

Character Name: Pokoh Hero
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: not tall but muscular has dark grey hair big round eyes
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As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things

 

1

first of all, NO MULTIPLE BACKSTORIES. Please pick one.

2

your definitions of meta and power gaming are not specific enough and need to be cleared up.

3

you need 2 lore refferals in your backstory. These can be history, events or nation names. Click on the wiki link at the end

4

Roleplay scenario is not supposed to be another description of sorts. Rather an answer to the example given.

5 

however you should have 3 traits in which 2 should be positive/neutral and one negative


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

 

WIKI

 

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Whoops, looks like your application didn’t make the cut for the following reasons ?

 

you did not change your application in time

 

BUT, have no worries, you can create another application immediately after! 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

m I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

WIKI









 

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