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little man

By little man

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: to play minecraft like how you play real life
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being godly and being very good at it
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. 

 

i would say im here to be a soldier

Character Name: Sam Wasker
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: a golden knight can not see the hair and eyes because he does not take off his helmet and he is very fit.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person and surround any dialogue with quotation marks.


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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