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- Please look over the definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming on our Wiki and add a more detailed response to your definitions.

- Please use some clarity in his backstory – Why are people scared of him? What pain did he feel for years? Your backstory is quite vague. Try adding official cities and events from our lore into your backstory. Where was he born? What was his childhood like? 

- Please adjust your character description. Explain what he looks like and what his personality is like.

- It appears you made your character quite magical in nature, please remember that new players are not allowed to start new characters with any knowledge or experience in magic. You must learn magic in the roleplay after you’ve been accepted.

- Your skin does not fit the description of a Dark Elf, they do not have glowing eyes.


Once you’ve made these changes, please contact me.

Failure to contact me within 24 hours will result in an immediate denial of this application.

 

If you need any help - The Application Team invites you to our New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/CzPeUH


Good luck!

Denied for failure to make necessary changes and to contact me within the 24 hour time limit.

This isn't the end, though! You are invited to make a new application.