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LionKiun

By LionKiun

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Cosgroe#9627
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information OOC information in IC
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: To behave as immortal, forcing other to do actions/emotes
    Status: Denied
For about half a minute Fesur peered into the gentleman’s rich suit, since in his native village few people dressed like that. After a little thought, he said that he wanted to move to a more promising place and engage in the trade of honestly acquired things. In any case, he did not quite understand why such information was necessary for the stranger.
 

 

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Character Name: Fesur Bassal
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Fessur is a strong-built man with brown eyes and dark brown hair. On the right eye there is a clearly visible scar. Growth about 2 meters.
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armajesty

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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application!

 

  • Your powergaming definition is not up to expectations. Please expand upon your thinking to prove your understanding.

  • Your metagaming definition is too vague. Please expand upon your thinking to prove your understanding.

    • The following link will provide an example of definitions for both of these terms that you are welcome to reference.

  • Your backstory has two pieces of lore as I assume you are referencing Helena (instead of Helen).

  • Your personality traits/quirks must only contain personality characteristics - his right eye having poor vision isn’t a trait.

  • Your personality traits/quirks mention magic. Your character can have no knowledge of magic or it’s existence.

  • Your roleplay scenario must include at least one piece of dialogue.

 

If you require any assistance feel free to PM me or add me on discord and/or contact me at armajesty#9473

 

You are also welcome to join our New Player Discord where you can contact other community staff, ask questions as well as speak with other new members!

 

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armajesty

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Your application has been denied as you have passed your 24 hour time limit to make revisions.

 

Feel free to re-apply at any time. Please also ensure to utilise the critique given from your ‘Pending’ message.


If you are in need of any assistance or would like to further discuss your denial, feel free to contact me on discord at armajesty#9473. You are also welcome to join the New Player Discord and ask for help from other members of my team.

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