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    Discord: kbrand#8390
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is where a character uses information that they would most likely not acctuly know or useing meathods of comunication that they would not have acces to an example of this would be if a town was getting raided and you messege all of youre friend
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gameing is when a player uses emotes that there character would probably not be able to acctuly do for example jeff summons jahh from the grave and commands him to kill steve.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: John Davis
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: John Davis is a relatively average human he has brown hair and blue eyes he wears normal clothes he appears as just another normal person.
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Hey, Floydcorn! Your application has been set to...
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Your application is very well-done and I'm glad to see the effort you've put into it.
There are a couple of things that need a little bit of tweaking though, and then you'll be completely ready for being accepted to Lord of the Craft!
To start things off...

 

The place you named is called Sutica, please make sure this is corrected within your biography.

 

There are areas within your application with poor spelling and grammar, please make sure that the incorrect spellings and such are corrected.

 

 

Your Backstory is also far too short. It must be a minimum of five solid lines, if not a couple of paragraphs.
Including two lore references and detailing your character's life from birth until the present day would work best.

 

 

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once you've managed to accomplish this, comment here or contact me as soon as possible. If you have any questions about my requests, send me a message here on the forums or send Rae#3015 a friend-request via Discord and we can talk!
If you log onto the server, you'll be able to message me as well by doing '/msg TheIchorDruid' followed by your question or talking in the Wandering Soul channel.
You do not have to make a new application to make these changes. Edit this one, please!
Failing to make these changes will result in an application denial, however, you can request additional time to work on the changes if you know you'll find yourself busy with something else.


If you'd like to see about getting help with anything else, related to your application or not, please join the New Player Discord!
https://discord.gg/KxA6EXT 


To simplify the process of joining LotC's community, here's a link to our New Player Guide. It elaborates on everything you could ever need for writing an application, doing commands in-game, understanding the chat channels, etc.
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide 

 

 

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