lurburk

You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

• Your Character Biography appears to be very well written and wonderfully explained, however, you have not included the mandatory (1) lore piece that must be within the biography, I’d recommend you to look over the LotC Wiki for some assistance!
• Your Character Traits/Quirks seems to be good, though, I’d recommend adding a better negative trait to your application.
• Your Roleplay Scenario appears to be missing an action to go along with the text; It must be both a text and action emote. 
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns.  

Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.
 

• Your Character Biography appears to be well written, however, I regret to inform you that the location that you have included- ‘San'Kala’ happens to be an outdated lore piece that is not allowed within the applications. I’d recommend you to look over the LotC Wiki for more recent locations on the front page!
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.