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Adrie Liadon

By Adrie Liadon

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: lvl_1220#5670
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is like giving your character knowledge that the player knows, but not the character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is like playing God and completely ignoring things that may stop you from doing so.
    Status: Denied

“Oh hello! I’ve come here more for adventure than anything. I love exploring and finding new things!” *She thanks the man for his kind welcome and asks a question* “Where could I get supplies if you don’t mind me asking?” *Adrie listens closely to his reply and once again, thanks him.* “I guess I’ll be on my way then.” *She heads off to wherever the man told her* (Sorry if this is a little much I really get into it when I’m role playing)

Character Name: Adrie Liadon
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 56
Physical Description: Blonde hair, pale skin, hazel eyes, often seen wearing leather armor.
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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character knows how to use a bow and arrow and conceal herself. All skills your character has prior to joining the server must not go beyond the very basic level; please correct accordingly!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

  • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race; wood elves cannot have blonde hair. Please correct your mistake after reading more on your race through the link below.

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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