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    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you hear something ooc and then know it ic
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when your character is more powerfull then all the other players
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Lilly Great
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 100
Physical Description: she has blue eyes and gray hear and has old dress with holes
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Greetings, your application has been placed on pending. You will have 24 hours to complete the following changes

 

Your definitions are really similar to another applicants. Please reword them a little more. You should read over our wiki on Powergaming and Metagaming

Your bio is also lacking. You need to make it a bit longer and add some lore to it. Look more into the Snow Elf Lore and information on The Princedom of Fenn.

Dead parents is a large cliche, while it does not have to be changed, I would love to see you give a different reason as to why she lives on her own.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes.

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Greetings, your application has been denied as you have not made the necessary changes. You may reapply 24 hours from this message. Please fix the following:

 

Your definitions are really similar to another applicants. Please reword them a little more. You should read over our wiki on Powergaming and Metagaming

Your bio is also lacking. You need to make it a bit longer and add some lore to it. Look more into the Snow Elf Lore and information on The Princedom of Fenn.

Dead parents is a large cliche, while it does not have to be changed, I would love to see you give a different reason as to why she lives on her own.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes.

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