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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Breaking the rules or doing something against what the game lets you do.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Trying to achieve your goal, to the point of not participating correctly.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Kyra
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 18|:|Human|:|Height: 156cm|:|Black Eyes|:|Black Hair|:|Button Nose|:|Large Eyes|:|Slim Figure|:|Small Scar On Left Cheek|:|Light Brown Skin
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but can use some help.

  1. The first thing is your metagame and powergame definition could use a little bit of help. I think you should take a look at the wiki and apply that knowledge to your application. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. Your biography actually has none of the servers lore on it. I would request you take a look at the wiki and add some of the servers lore. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  3. your interesting facts are just one word I would request you take a look at them and make them into sentences.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few  changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

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