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May Mousie


Elisabet
  • Rules: No
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: May Mousie#8365
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-Gaming is when I give a character information that the character itself didn't know, because I knew it, not "them." So for example, if I know 2x5 but my character never taught herself what 2x5 was, but I do, and I add it to a sentence, I'm Meta-Gamin
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power-Gaming means to be overpowering, godly, or being unfair
    Status: Denied

Elisabet looked around with a heartwarming smile as she looked at the gentleman with a smile still on her face. "I came here to just live my life, I don't care about money or adventure, I just want a place that I could call home, and I would also enjoy to start a family here, do you have time to show me around the city? I want to explore what's hidden behind these city walls, If you're wondering what my name is, it's Elisabet, Elisabet Hogget Bethell, what's your name?" Her gaze trailed back at the shops and stalls with yet another, heartwarming smile, curious to know what's within the cities walls.


Character Name: Elisabet Hogget Bethell
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She has Light fair skin with blonde hair and blue eyes with rosy lips, wavy hair and straight nose, wears a red dress w/ a scarf, she is 114 lbs, 5'5.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application was good, but you need to fix a few things:
 

 

METAGAMING AND POWERGAMING: Your definition of Metagaming is almost there, but don’t worry, it needs a small fix. Here you have the link to the wiki, be sure to understand what Metagaming fully means! (It’s easy!)

 

BIOGRAPHY:  Although it is so good, you need to fix the last line of the Biography →

one of her favorite legends was that of ", because it seems that you have left your biography unfinished

 

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION AND PERSONALITY TRAITS: Although they look fine and good, I ask you to unite them through connectors and verbs in order to have full written sentences! ^^

 

 You have 24 hours to make the changes (you won’t even last 5 minutes! ^^). Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

  

Feel free to join the New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions, seek for help and get to know new players. Contact me here on the forums, or by discord (Kursion#5029)

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Changed Status to Denied

 

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This is Minecraft PC Server, not an Xbox one!

If you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Kursion#5029), or by /msg <Kursion23> in-game. 

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