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miss_moo_moo_ftw

By miss_moo_moo_ftw

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: interacting with games or game-like systems
    Status: Denied

im very wealthy and wish to trade

i see many store im sure to buy stuff

i hope i meet new kind chaps 

this city looks so pretty thats why i came 

i wont be staying just a good old jerney to new places

Character Name: Missmoomooftw2
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: blonde, blue eyes
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camocat9

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to plagiarism, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are both plagiarized and incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.
  • Your Character Name does not fit the setting of this server. ‘Missmoomooftw2’ is not a valid name that would make sense in this time period.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes and one action.
  • Your Skin does not fit the time period of LoTC. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography includes a far too common trope of your character’s parents being killed by bandits. Please change this accordingly.
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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