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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowledge your in game person would not otherwise know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing someone to do something such as severing their arm or killing them
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Mac Donahue
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 47
Physical Description: Brown Hair, receding hairline,roughly 6.1, 136lbs, small scars all over his face, beginning of a beard, and old ring on his left hand, decent build
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As you are using a guest account, you will need to make another application to try again. Please make the requested edits then re-apply

 

Ø  Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however I'd like you to add a bit more detail to them, and add some examples.

Ø  You need to include at least one lore reference in your character biography- refer to the Wiki to find these.

Ø  Your character cannot be related to any form of royalty/nobility. Please change this

Ø  You need to include one weakness as part of your three interesting facts- please add one.

Ø  The eyes on your skin are a little too bright to look realistic, I'd ask that you make the blue a bit darker.

 

I strongly recommend you make a forum account, as this will allow you to edit applications as well as use our forums for roleplay purposes.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

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