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xerax

By xerax

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: M0nkey#8293
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Doing something out of character that your avatar was not told in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Having control over peoples experience in game
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: Xerax
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Tall, light brown skin, and long black hair, and thin, one red eye and another black eye
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Please ensure that you include an example for your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→ Your character can’t have been born in Arcas if they are only 18 as Almaris has been the current Realm for over 18 years. Please change what Realm your character was born in or increase their age accordingly.

→ Your application can’t contain any reference to magic or alchemy. Please update that accordingly. 

→ Please remove the part about the soldiers' condition being that you fight against Sutica with them as there is no ongoing Oren-Sutica conflict so that condition wouldn’t make sense.

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

→ Wood Elves can’t have a red and a black eye. Please change this accordingly.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves 

→ What your characters biggest fear is should be at least two sentences.

→ What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences.

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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