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MrWhiffed


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Delafu #8001
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i dont know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i dont know
    Status: Denied

Glory gets short, i want to be a legend


Character Name: Balin II
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

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