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msd20102
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of character information in roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: making your character smarter and better
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I would tell the man “thank you. I am just here for some good times.” Then I would buy a bunch of things from the market to have an awesome party. I will invite the man in the suit and tell him he can bring his friends. Then I will have a huge epic party with everyone in the server and we will all have a good time.


Character Name: msd20102
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: i am very tall and very strong. i have brown hair and brown eyes
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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?
  • Your Character Biography needs to tell the story of a character.
  • Your Character Name is not viable. Please choose one that a human could reasonably be named.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

  • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
  • Your Skin is not a skin. Please find a viable Minecraft character skin.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response states that you will have an “epic party with everyone in the server.” Again, this is in roleplay, so your answers must be in roleplay; no out of character references may be made.
  • As a final note, this is a roleplay server. All interactions, unless specified otherwise, are done with a character and done in-character. Thus, you must apply as the character you plan to play, not as yourself. 


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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