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Nyxiechu

By Nyxiechu

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Nyxiechu#8965
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming, often also referred to simply as 'Meta', is the use of information acquired out-of-character, in-character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions.
    Status: Denied

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Character Name: Shiro Mezukai
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Female/Elf/6"0'/140 lbs/Pale almost white skin with freckles dotting her nose/Blue-grey long hair with side-swept bangs/Turquoise cat-like eyes.
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you made too many errors. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are plagiarized; please write them in your own words. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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