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OceanHarmonyx
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: OceanHarmonyX #8648
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using self knowledge to define a characters knowledge and not the characters.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using a Overpowered character/move unfairly controlling or effecting other characters.
    Status: Denied

Feeling anxious and wary of this stranger i pull at my hood almost in hope of some comfort hoping he would leave. Seeing he has no intentions of letting up i take a deep breath before i speak my voice somewhat soft and quiet. “I would like to say this city is lovely but i have yet to experience and explore it. I am simply just wandering i suppose you could say looking for my  meaning of which i hope this place could help” i fiddle with my hands as i look away from the man and towards the bazaar before turning back to him “i don’t suppose you have any recommendations of places to look?” i question watching him for an answer hoping it would aid me.

 

 

(I hope its ok to have put in that the man persisted to want an answer i thought it would help establish my characters reactions)


Character Name: Fern willows
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: curvy body type.stands at 5"8. has brown eyes and hair dyed at the ends. usually wears hoods (usually to hide her ears) and long coats.
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord AnonymousAlexa#3562 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AnonymousAlexa#3562, and I recommend you join the 

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