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paisafreak
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Paisa Freak #1595
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it is out of character information
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unfair or godly actions that take the fun out of the game
    Status: Denied

Thank you!

But I just look for peace and happiness. 


Character Name: reez teller
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: My character is thin, with a dark complexion. His eyes are ice blue with dirty clothes that hide his war-torn body.
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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

  • I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions are understandable yet vague so, a good way to prove that you know the definitions of these two terms would be through using examples.
  • Your Character Biography is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not appear to be at a minimum of (10) sentences, including you are missing the mandatory (2) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
  • Both your Character's Physical Description and Personality Traits appear to be sufficient, though remove ‘My Character’ from both as this could lead to further complications. I would as well recommend you to review them and ensure they are in the minimum (3) complete sentences. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario response looks good, however, It would need to include an emote/action as well.
  • Your Character’s Skin does not appear to line up with the period that LotC is set upon, the colors as well make it not suitable for the server- I would suggest either taking a look at the LotC Skin Archive or submitting an alternate skin.

    You can also join our
    New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns.
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Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.

 

  • I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-Gaming and Power-GamingBoth of your definitions are understandable yet vague so, a good way to prove that you know the definitions of these two terms would be through using examples.
  • Your Character Biography is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not appear to be at a minimum of (10) sentences, including you are missing the mandatory (2) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
  • Both your Character's Physical Description and Personality Traits appear to be sufficient, though remove ‘My Character’ from both as this could lead to further complications. I would as well recommend you to review them and ensure they are in the minimum (3) complete sentences. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario response looks good, however, It would need to include an emote/action as well.
  • Your Character’s Skin does not appear to line up with the period that LotC is set upon, the colors as well make it not suitable for the server- I would suggest either taking a look at the LotC Skin Archive and submitting an alternate skin.

    You can also join our
    New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.
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