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Prieston

By Prieston

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Preston#6229
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using outside knowledge to influence in-game decisions.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: defining one's self as inherently more powerful than others
    Status: Denied

“if you’re looking to sell me something, you can quit the act. I’m not Buying anything”  *shrugs into a slouched walk* “what business is it of Yours anyway?”
*mumbles under breath* “preying on newcomers...*scoffs*  “i ought to pay him a visit later tonight and see what sort of riches he has for the taking”

 

*continues to walk down the road to the market*

Character Name: Azdrek
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 60
Physical Description: Thin Frail, Torn Silken robes, Cautious posture.
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WonkManBad

 

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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming are quite short. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming for examples on how to lengthen your replies.

  • Your backstory mentions Renalia-Gladewynn, a recently created settlement here in Arcas. And you’ve also mentioned that your character grew up there, and now is of the age ~60. We can not accept your application until you can fix this inconsistancy. The name of a nation is also not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your physical description is also quite short. Please go more in-depth with your description of Azdrek.

     

    When you have made the changes, feel free to

     contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

    further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

    in our New Player Discord.

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WonkManBad

 

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

 

→ Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming was quite short.
  • Your backstory mentions Renalia-Gladewynn, a recently created settlement here in Arcas; which subsequently, did not match up with yout characters age. 
  • Your physical description was also quite short.

You may reapply at any time.

 

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