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Psychot1cM3
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Psychot1cM3#2406
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it is term that role play games like this one players use real life knowledge to determent the players actions
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: a type of interaction with games with the aim of maximizing progress toward a goal
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. Im just here to survive what about you. you seem to be very wealthy .


Character Name: Avern
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: tall, strong, not that smart has dark purple eyes and long white hair
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many Errors

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • You did not answer the question if you have role-played or not
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one positive trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • What is your character’s biggest fear need to at least have 2 sentences
  • What does your character like most about themselves need to at least have 2 sentences
  • What does your character dislike most about themselves? Why? need to at least have 2 sentences and you need to explain why
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response needs to have to quotations around your dialogue
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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