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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Ren_Nexus#8808
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming includes knowing certain things that you shouldn't probably know or would learn as you play
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming includes those who force actions on others like saying that Jack sliced Frank's arm off instead of Jack attempted to slice Fraank's arm off
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

"Good morning Sir," Ren asks politely. "I came here to seek the dark beast that lies within the forbidden forest," He answers honestly. The stranger who greeted Ren pointed towards the highest point of the mountains and said, "There lies the beast you search for, but beware of its bite." The stranger warns. 

Character Name: Ren SliverThorne
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: red hair with grayish-blue eyes. wears strange armor that bears the color red
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KingoArcher

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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