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Hey! As you can see, your app is stellar and  almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

Character Biography

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! Please do not use lore from LOTR! Make sure to read the Wiki and review the server's lore.

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

Personality Traits/Quirks

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks mentions trolls and the Ilúvatarism faith! Please make sure you review our Wiki and use sever lore!

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 Roleplay Scenario Response

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. It must be at least four sentences long, includes at least one piece of dialogue and one action, and follows the prompt.

  • For example: Monk Pippa steps off the boat, her clumsy footing stumbling about as she stepped onto the deck. "Woah," murmurs the halfing - her lips curling up into a small grin before her gaze settled onto the man in question. "Hello!" Greeted the woman. "I am here to make new friends- and to help people, of course!" Then, with a brisk nod, she stepped off towards the bustling town!

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

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Once you’ve finished or if you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message niijaro) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above!

Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after,  just make sure you correct the things listed!

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If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message niijaro) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

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