Riley1236

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

I. Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

II. Your Character Biography states a few things that would need to be tweaked to comply with application standards/rules.

a. The shorthand for Dark Elves on LotC is ‘ker (shortened form of mali’ker which is what Dark Elves are called in Elven), not Drow.

b. Velunor was a settlement on the continent of Atlas, which has been uninhabitable for decades. Since your character is 18, she would have been born on the continent of Arcas and couldn’t have moved back to Atlas. Due to Velunor not really working here, the mention of it would need to be removed and you’d need a new, valid lore reference.

c. Your mention of “a dark substance in the midst” doesn’t really make much sense. Please remove/alter this.

III. Unfortunately, we greatly discourage playing villain characters of this degree as a new player, as we aren’t sure if you’d be quite acquainted enough with our server to follow the villainy rules properly. If you still wish to play a villain character, I recommend you start with one that is much more toned down.

IV. Dark elves cannot have pink eyes. Please alter this in your physical description/skin. Additionally, the inside of your character’s hands (the sides facing the torso) seem to be discolored.

V. Please alter any and all grammar/spelling errors you can (I suggest using apps like Grammarly). Additionally, please clear the strikethrough formatting and the alternating cApS of your Roleplay Scenario.

VI. Just a note, elves are considered adults in their society at age 50, so your character would be mentally and physically 18, but culturally considered a child.

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

Your application has been denied due to no response within the allotted 24-hour timeframe. Feel free to re-apply whenever you wish! PM me here or on Discord @UwUPlant#0017 if you have questions.