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rosereaper99
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: rosereaper#3313
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: use of players real life knowledge of charaters actions
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: carry's out unreal actions and aims to increase progress toward a certain golal
    Status: Denied

Scenario-

You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”

My responce

“ why hello i am here to have a look around at your beautiful city and see what is to offer”i said as i slowly begin to walk away. as i was doing so i was having a good look around at the beautiful city and smiling at any one who smiles at me. I continued walking in the streets to see the scenery and the nature around the city 


Character Name: Gorwen
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: dark haired,green eyes ,thin
wears light purple dress 6 foot 4 inches
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to the number of things that need to be changed, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions could do with some examples! Take a look at the wiki for some example-examples, and try to create your own!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography states that your character was born in Evenstar. This is not a location that exists within LOTC, so please change this accordingly.
  • Your Character Biography states that your character owns a stable and a large house within Oren. Due to the nature of the server, players cannot start with property unless they ask to join a family (and are accepted into said family) that already owns it. Any other property must be gained through roleplay.
  • Your Physical Description states that your character is 6’4”. Wood Elves typically range between 4’5” and 5’11”, with any above 6’0” being extremely rare. It would be nearly impossible for your character to be the height you state. For more information, please read the Wood Elf wiki page!
  • Your Physical Description does not match your skin. Please change this accordingly!
  • Your Character Likes states that your character likes how plants seem to grow around them and how animals seem to talk to them. If this is magic, your character is not allowed to start with it and must learn it in-character from other players who are magic teachers. But, if this is not magic and is simply your character thinking that they have some sort of ‘connection’ to nature either due to their own mindset or their religion, than this would be an extremely interesting character concept.
  • Your Character Likes is simply stating something that your character dislikes about the world around them, and not what they dislike about themselves. Please change this accordingly!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long.
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Wood Elves have a darker skin. For some examples, please take a look at the Wood Elf skins in our Skin Archive!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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