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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: doing stuff based on my knowledge not my characters knowledge
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: playing only to win
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Avaldur
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 91
Physical Description: black hair, strong, good combat knowledge , great miner, black hair , no beard
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  • Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions need work. I also suggest looking up power-emoting.
  • Your biography needs elaborating- try to make it at least 7 sentences.
    • You also need to try and watch your grammar. Capitals at the beginning of sentences, and so on.
    • You need at least two pieces of lore that aren’t just dropped at the end of the sentence.
  • Try and write your description as a sentence or two.
  • Your interesting facts should display a positive, neutral and negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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