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HanzHartkopf
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: MIKA#0056
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you use out of character information but youre chracter couldn´t have got this information
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you play unfair to feel powerful
    Status: Denied

“Im finding my place in this world and I also want Money” He said before continuing his travel. 


Character Name: Hans Hartkopf
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Blue eyes, Blond hair, 80kg wight, 2m high
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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.


You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

 

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is quite short. Please expand a bit more on your current definitions. Perhaps provide examples and such? if you need so, you may review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming for reference.

  • Your backstory requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support if you require so.

  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example for reference on how to format your response.

  • Your personality traits needs to be traits about your characters personality; not their likes and dislikes. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits.

  • Overall, your grammar needs to be punctuated and relatively correct for you to pass our application process.

 

When you have made the changes, feel free to leave a comment on this page,

or contact me through discord at @frog#0483. If you require further assistance, contact me

or any Community Staff Member found in our New Player Discord.

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Ayo!  I’ve reviewed your application once again and

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

  • Your definition for Powergaming is still quite short. Please expand a bit more on your current definitions. Perhaps provide examples and such? if you need so, you may review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming for reference.
  • Your personality traits needs to be traits about your characters personality; not their likes and dislikes. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits.

 

Good work so far on revising your application! I know sometimes it’s quite difficult to create

a character with all this information about something you don’t know as well being thrown at you. If you have any

question, concerns, or just overall want some assistance when you go about revising your application

again, my discord (frog#0483) is always open for PM’s! Best of luck! 

 

 

When you have made the changes, feel free to leave a comment on this page,

or contact me through discord at @frog#0483. If you require further assistance, contact me

or any Community Staff Member found in our New Player Discord.

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes

within the 24 hours you were given.

 

Here are the changes you had to make.

  • Your definition for Powergaming was still quite short.
  • Your personality traits needed to be traits about your characters personality; not their likes and dislikes.

 

 

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

do send a Community Team Member or myself a friend request over discord

and PM them or myself at @frog#0483. I’d be more than happy to

help you if you choose to reapply.

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