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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: United#7686
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Informing my friends, I am about to get on the server
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Over explaining a motion.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Well, I don't really know yet. I will have to see what this so called "Lovely City" brings me.


Character Name: Black Gym
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Blue eyes, black hair, ripped up clothing like a pirate, pretty strong, 4'2, and 120 pounds.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography states your character is a mountain elf. I recommend you review the lists of races LotC has to offer. If you mean to say your character is a mix between an elf and mountain dwarf, or solely a mountain dwarf, please clarify accordingly. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks states your character is a Christian. Unfortunately, Christianity does not exist on the server and the closest thing we have to offer is Cannonism.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

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Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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