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SavierTheSpy
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: an aprouch to the game that works outside the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: a way of interacting with a game to maximise the progress to a goal
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Selecta
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 90
Physical Description: I'm a closed girl. don't show much of myself but I don't particularly hate everyone. I'm strange to the usual Elf uses for some reason.
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

  1. Your Meta game and Power game definition, can use a little bit of help. I would request that you come back and take a look and edit it. If you need help please look to the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page.
  2. You biography is short and needs some help with lore, I would request you please add to it and then put some of the servers lore into it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 
  3. Your skin is not really lore friendly for the Snow elfs. If you need help to find what they look like here is the old skin thread. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/ 

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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letoGzw.png Do not fret, you can re apply. I would take the messages I have given you and use them. I have also sent you a message on the fourms telling you what you are still lacking. If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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