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Trap
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Trap#5272
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Abusing game mechanics basically that break immersino
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Grinding and becoming a god man
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Trap
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 256
Physical Description: This stout dwarf wreaks of mead. Bathing is clearly not part of his repertoire.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hello! I'm Keening and I'll be going over your application!

If you have any questions whilst you wait for me to finish, you're free to contact me here via the forums or by sending me a friend request over Discord; Keening#2991

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Hey, Trap! Your application has been set to...
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There are a number of things that need to be elaborated upon or rewritten.

Successfully edit your application to conform with the following guidelines, then you'll be completely ready for being accepted to Lord of the Craft!

To start things off...

 


 

You seem to be lacking the Two Lore References that're required in your backstory.

  • Lore references can include a nation or city name, a renowned event, mentioning a previous realm, any of our various races, and so on. The two you decide to include are ultimately up to you!
  • Our Wiki is a great source for finding events, city names, nations, etc.

 

Your Backstory is also far too short. It must be a minimum of five solid lines, if not a couple paragraphs.

  • Including lore references and detailing your character's life from birth until the present day would work best.

 

Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming are wrong. Please rewrite them to have more detail and in your own words.

  • The Wiki has a page on powergaming and metagaming that you can reference for help, just make sure you don't copy it word-for-word.


The Interesting Facts portion of your application is lacking a proper negative trait. Please change this to show one of your character's flaws before you continue.

  • Having more than just one character flaw is fine, too.


Your Character Description is lacking; including various tidbits like hair color, eye color, their clothing, height, weight, and overall build would work splendidly.

  • Remember, you should be able to visualize the character when you close your eyes. If you can't, I likely won't be able to either!

 



You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once you've managed to accomplish this, comment here or contact me as soon as possible. If you have any questions about my requests, send me a message here on the forums or send Keening#2991 a friend-request via Discord and we can talk!

  • If you log onto the server, you'll be able to message me as well by doing '/msg Keening' followed by your question or talking in the Wandering Soul channel.
  • You do not have to make a new application to make these changes. Edit this one, please!
  • Failing to make these changes will result in an application denial, however, you can request additional time to work on the changes if you know you'll find yourself busy with something else.


If you'd like to see about getting help with anything else, related to your application or not, please join the New Player Discord!


To simplify the process of joining LotC's community, here's a link to our New Player Guide. It elaborates on everything you could ever need for writing an application, doing commands ingame, understanding the chat channels, etc.

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I'm sorry to say, but the allotted 24-hours are up and your application has been...

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Though, don't worry! You can reapply immediately; I only ask that you submit this current application with the changes I requested. It'll undergo another review, whether by myself or another Community Team member, and we'll see if anything else needs changing!

  • If you have any questions, don't hesitate in contacting me here on the forums or via Discord by sending a friend request; Keening#2991

 

If you'd like to see about getting help with rewriting this application, please join the New Player Discord!

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