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Hello, first i’ll like to welcome you to the server, although I have placed your application on Pending though don’t worry, this just means you have a few mistakes in your application which can be improved upon before we allow you to join our server and community. 

The changes which i’ll like see polished out would be;

• Your Definitions on both metagaming and powergaming need to be expanded on to see if we know that you understand both correctly. Written in your own words. You can find both examples here:

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https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

• Second, when it comes to your biography. We’ve had several other maps then Atlas you can reference, if you can do this and change your application to suit. As simply referring to ‘born far away from Atlas’ wouldn’t cut it. You can find the other maps here:

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https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Realms

• Third, airships are currently not accepted lore on LoTC which I would have you refrain from utilizing it in your application. Simply change these to a boat or cart. On this fact, a sky-city doesn’t currently exist either so you’ll have to remove that, if you wish to know one of our city names and considering you’re a human i’ll refer you to one on the wiki, simply change sky-city out to one existing one – you will find this listed under the Nation Section; 

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https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

• Forth reason, although you can be a scientist and engineer in your biography i’ll recommend toning down the level of expertise. On this note, you’ve mentioned assisting in the creation of a device to create a portal. As the reasons suggested above, remove this. It doesn’t fit in current LoTC lore, nor does Dimension jumping. 

For your application biography as a whole, i’ll recommend rewording it to say you grew up in a city of Atlas (list the city), to which you where an apprentice blacksmith who not only forged tools became a self-taught engineerist. On an experiment turned wrong you gained amnesia and lost some of your memories of the time. Now wondering the land of Atlas trying to remember your past. This is an example of something on how i’ll restructure your biography and something that if you do want to go down write in your own words.

If you feel like you need assistance with your application, feel free to message me either by replying to this thread, sending me a forum message (click on my profile picture to get that selection) or message me through discord; Jenny Bobbs#0001 .

Alternatively you can also go to the New Player Discord to ask for assistance also, this can be found here: https://discord.gg/7HKkDFq

I wish you the best with your application, you have 24 hours from this point to fix your app. Once done you can either message me directly via mediums above or wait for me to look over the application every few hours to see if you have any changes. 

Regards

Jenny.

Didn’t update application in time, reasons above.

You can reapply in 24 hours.