Sempai_Yiyi

• Your definition for Metagaming is incorrect. Please review the server’s wiki-page on Metagaming, found here: Metagaming & Powergaming
• Your Backstory, while it meets the minimum length, contains quite a few errors that need to be addressed. Your backstory also ventures on the side of being overpowered. It suggests that your character is undefeatable as a top assassin; especially considering that she is a child for her age. The excerpt, “making her taller while keeping her youthful appearance by making her skin even paler.” does not make sense. Making yourself taller and the like is lore-breaking. Your backstory also lacks direct lore references: The server’s Wikia Page contains much information on lore that you could implement in your backstory.
• Your Physical Description needs to be rewritten, as per the weight in relationship to the height is unrealistic. I already stated that making herself taller was lore-breaking

While your application was generally okay, there were areas of issue that need editing, one of those also being spelling. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me on discord at Language#1688 once these changes go through. Reviewing links may help with your editing, but you may always join our New Player Discord to ask some questions to our Community Staff.

For future assistance, feel free to contact me at Language#1688 

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