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SgtPepper20
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: macca#3044
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: no outside knowledge should reflect in your characters actions unless it is known to them.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Godly actions
    Status: Denied

"well, I came from the village of _______ in search of a military career. Say, do you know where the military training grounds are?"


Character Name: Glorfindel
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Glorfindel is 5'7, brown hair, and is super strong.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character received 500gp. GP is not a currency part of LOTC, please change it to the widely known and used mina currency our server has.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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