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Shoutmon_x7

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it makes sense and is good to be implemented
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it is a good idea that it is real
    Status: Denied

I ask "Why are you  so nice to me?"

Character Name: sakulr
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A human mutated to be a cross between the ender dragon and wither, no hair, height: 1-meter weight: 150 lbs, left eye: full white, right eye: purple.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! You cannot be a hybrid of an enderdragon and a wither.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your race. You cannot be a hybrid of an enderdragon and a wither.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long.

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long.

  • Please be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character was mutated - this is not LoTC lore friendly so I recommend editing this!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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