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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Piglet#5081
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Un-lifelike actions or motives that is gained for any means whistle out of character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing other to act as if your character is more able that they should be. Like pretending to be superman
    Status: Denied

Land sir, I have saved for my life to grow some grain and feed those of this fine city.


Character Name: Guanciale
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Lightly tattered brown dungarees along with a old grey shirt slightly too large for my slim build and small stature.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 


Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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