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Armageddon Hakai

By Armageddon Hakai

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Tagalagadingdong#0123
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Somebody's use of real life knowledge concerning the state of the game to determine their character's actions
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is a style of interacting games or a game like sytem.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

      He would lie and say "Grand aspiration and adventure of course. I enjoy going out, but I also want to help society grow." He would want to create trust with other people, while he is scheming on what to do, or his next move to destroy this city inside out. If he has to, he will act dumb to relief any suspicions. 

Character Name: Armageddon Hakai
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Short for an orc. green with blue eyes. Has kinda of a brown cloak. Has a skull on the pants. The pants have some red.
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Your application has been denied at this time. The primary reason is that your application indicates a lack of a solid foundational understanding of our lore and what is canon within our realm. Feel free to apply again at any time with the following changes in mind:

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography contains an invalid lore. Characters cannot apply as dragons, and the soul  breaking you are describing, does not exist here.

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your character is too old, they cannot be older than 100. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! It cannot be in first person.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

For questions regarding how your application has been handled, feel free to contact me via. Forums or Discord @ Mingo#2467
 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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