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sluggore
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: dont hack?
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i dont know how to do that man
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

hi im a dwarf i suppose
Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: sluggore
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a man with cloak or idk
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Changed Status to Pending

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Please make the following changes in the next 48 hours:

  • Please expand on your power-gaming and meta-gaming responses. Try to explicitly mention how you would avoid doing them on accident. If you are having a hard time understanding these terms please feel free to refer to any of the sources below.
  • Please expand on your roleplay response. This is meant to be a clear interaction between your character and the old hag, so feel free to get creative and come up with a response for her. Try to make it 4-6 sentences long and try to include actions as well as dialogue.
  • Please expand on your character's Physical Description. Try to explain his appearance in good detail.
  • Please try to use the best writing you can in your application, and avoid shorthand phrases such as 'idk'

 

If you need help making the changes, here are some sources:

 

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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Changed Status to Denied

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please expand on your power-gaming and meta-gaming responses. Try to explicitly mention how you would avoid doing them on accident. If you are having a hard time understanding these terms please feel free to refer to any of the sources below.
  • Please expand on your roleplay response. This is meant to be a clear interaction between your character and the old hag, so feel free to get creative and come up with a response for her. Try to make it 4-6 sentences long and try to include actions as well as dialogue.
  • Please expand on your character's Physical Description. Try to explain his appearance in good detail.
  • Please try to use the best writing you can in your application, and avoid shorthand phrases such as 'idk'

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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