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Snowden234

By Snowden234

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Snowden234#8218
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: had a rol in a game with its own characteristics, and had destination in your role
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: had a agressive conduct for a thing or a power.
    Status: Denied

Politic,Medic,soldier,economist.

Character Name: friedrich ludwig
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: brown hair,semi golden glasses,white skin color,tall,gray gloves,brown-gray t-shirt whit a tie, (looks very medieval i think thats good for the rol)
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character had a great knowledge of war at 25 years old. Your character cannot be well-learned in such things prior to joining the server; things like that should be learned through active roleplay on the server after acceptance.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. It must include dialogue in quotes to distinguish the speaking from the actions.

 


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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