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Daemyek
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Basiclly knowing like your part of the roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: increasing the power and influence of your character
    Status: Denied

i respond with "well im to seek adventure and sell some weapons and armor that i have in my boat, now may i ask where is the nearest shop that i can sell my weapons and armor


Character Name: Daemyek
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 36
Physical Description: i'm a adventurer i come from a long line of noble knights |5'10, 124lbs, green eys, brown hair, very well built|
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help "> 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that orcs killed your parents. That is a character trope, you must change it.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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