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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: OffWithYourNed#0245
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information gained out of game, or out of character to help or aid your own character in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Performing unrealistic actions of other characters - eg killing someone instantly
    Status: Denied

“Regulations, expectations, matters I have no choice in. Now if you would please excuse me.”

I continue walking onwards to the market to purchase basic necessities, ensuring that I walk around unnoticed from then on.


Character Name: Estrien
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: Long dark red hair, light green eyes, relatively tall, slim, slightly athletic build, always wearing hunting clothes, pale complexion
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Power Gaming definition could be stronger.
  • Your Personality traits list your character as skilled with archery. Remember not to start off to skilled, as this could be considered power gaming.
  • In your Roleplay Scenario, switch all “I”’s in your action to “She/her/hers”. This is for clarity sake, as it is how most RP is done on the server.
  • Your bio has some issues. Lets talk about them!
    • Please do not use the common “My parents died/gave me away when I was born” trope. I like the idea of being raised by a village, just change how you approach it a bit.
      • Hobbits are not called hobbits in this world, but halflings, fix this.
      • Half elves do not have their own village
      • You lack two lore references, update this

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Failed to re-submit in 24 hours.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Lordscisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

 

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