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SrPererinha

By SrPererinha

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: jvperapodre#5280
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is collecting information from outside the game and using it within the game. How to use information that you heard in the discord or skipe and use in the game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is overdoing actions, which can make your character very powerful.
    Status: Denied 
I came looking for riches. And who are you?
Character Name: Jonas Walter
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: I have white hair, blue eyes, fair skin, and a scar in the left eye.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character's mother was killed by bandits. This is a common character trope, so I would recommend amending this!

  • Your Character Biography has bits of plagiarism. This is not allowed!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • I would also recommend changing your Character's Biggest Fear, since a fear of death is very common amongst people! Your character's biggest fear should be somewhat unique to them and add to their personality.

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

 

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