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Filio

By Filio

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of character information in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using unfair actions
    Status: Denied

'Adventure, most of all. And to rest from my traveling. ill stay here for a few days, and then i will travel further.'  And then he walks away from the man

Character Name: Filio
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: blue eyes, brown hair, 1.6 meters tall, weighs 35 kilograms, not very muscular but not not muscular
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character wanted to adventure Arcas and live in New Reza. These are old locations that your character would not have been alive for, so I recommend correcting this!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • I also recommend editing your Character's Biggest Fear, since dying is a fear that is very common among individuals. Your character's fear should be unique to them and add to their personality!

  • Please be sure to state what caused your character to develop their fear as well.

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race. Halflings cannot be more than 3'3 in height. I recommend taking a look at this wiki page on halflings for more information! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Halflings

  • Your Character Biography uses a common character trope (family killed by bandits). Please correct this accordingly!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

 

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