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strive4pride
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: Strive4pride#0172
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: infomation found in/out of character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: putting yourself in a godly, untoutchable, omnipotent position.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond.

I'm here to beseech the word of death upon those who have done me and my homeland wrong. Let us hope you are not one of the beseeched.


Character Name: Lukas
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Blue Aquatic eyes
Long Vibrant White/Blonde Hair.
Body Build: Slightly Muscular.
Height: 6.7. Weight: 200 grms
Screenshot of Skin:



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✿You’re On the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

✿ Your Powergaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

✿ Your Metagaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions.

 

✿Your Character Biography must be at least TEN sentences long, it also must include at least ONE lore references Use our WIKI for some help! You may not start out with knowledge of magic or knowing it. You may not be a being forged of light. Within our lore there is no such thing as Haven islands. i would check the wiki again at settlement guides or major charters.

✿ Your skin doesnt fit with your characetr description or the race description. Please darken your Characters skin colour to resemble tan like a wood elf you can find skins here

✿Your Physical descrption These must be complete sentences and not a list of traits. Describe what they look like.  They are also a wood elf, Wood elf dont tend to have pale skin. 

 Thats a good start to your roleplay scenario! I would suggest adding an action with * on either side*.  So for my example : *Smiles wide, in a jittery sense “Oh! Oh! Im looking for some shinies to add to my collection for my grandfather!” 

 

You only have 24 Hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes, you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord. Discord:Tigergiri#0744  Im always happy to help!

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join ourr New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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✿ Your Powergaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

✿ Your Metagaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

 

 

✿Your Character Biography must be at least TEN sentences long, it also must include at least ONE lore referenceUse our WIKI for some help! You may not start out with knowledge of magic or knowing it. You may not be a being forged of light. Within our lore there is no such thing as Haven islands. i would check the wiki again at settlement guides or major charters.

✿ Your skin doesnt fit with your characetr description or the race description. Please darken your Characters skin colour to resemble tan like a wood elf you can find skins here ‘

✿Your Physical descrption These must be complete sentences and not a list of traits. Describe what they look like.  They are also a wood elf, Wood elf dont tend to have pale skin. 

✿  Thats a good start to your roleplay scenario! I would suggest adding an action with * on either side*.  So for my example : *Smiles wide, in a jittery sense “Oh! Oh! Im looking for some shinies to add to my collection for my grandfather!”

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