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SweetbutLoca

By SweetbutLoca

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: c a t a l i n a#8383
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Roleplaying a type of character not using real life issues.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming to me would be like dnd plus overwatch and each person their own storyline.
    Status: Denied

Eyes opening wide, as I step of this smelly boat. The shops, the noises, people, and the smell of fresh stew is intriguing. As I stepped off the boat docks, a young well dressed man comes up to me. "Welcome! What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?". I started to giggle and say "well sir If I were to tell you my secrets that would be no fun!" and i skipped towards the shops to browse.

Character Name: Catalina
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Brown hair, brown eyes, red elf ears, lean body shape. Human and elf hybrid if possible.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→ Don’t mention Lord of the Craft in your character biography.

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Elf ears can’t be red. I suggest checking out the Wiki for more information on the various races.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races#Elf 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

→ What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences. 

→ Please ensure that your roleplay scenario is written in third person.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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